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***** somefntastic - I Wake Up Strange ... Originality - 15/20 Naaa ... Whoever the guys you use for your background must be a group of singers (Great Big Sea?), I bet (I'm sorry, I don't know any about the latest music trend *grin*). Nothing wrong with that, but there are too many people use their favorite artist/s as the main graphic for their layout which is pretty ... too many. Personality - 17/20 Reasonable entries lenght. Cool. And you're expressive, too in your writing :) Artistry - 15/30 Cluttered. You really love those guys and they eat most of your page. Resize them, or anything. match the color of your 8op box with your main background color (black). The way you type your fave diaries is also pretty funny, all is ended by "!". You need to set your link font with the same size of the non-link one. Again, I think this happened because you don't want those guys look ugly and overlapped with your writing. Hey, they are just a part of your diary. Be fair with yourself, it's your diary and not theirs. Give more space for yourself. Commitment - 7/10 Many days skipped even though there are some multiples. Navigation - 10/10 No complain so far here. Errors - 5/5 No broken image, no broken link. Reasonable downloading time. Extras - 5/5 Many, many extras. Nice. Notes: You are a good writer, but your writing is somehow drowned by your layout. People want to read you when they come to your diary and not just seeing those "Great Big Sea" guys. You're more interesting than them for your readers, believe me. Total: 74 Reviewed by Tiara *****
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